WHAT
TO INCLUDE, WHAT TO LEAVE BEHIND
 
The
point of the paper is to show your skill at visual and historical
analysis, that is, taking things apart, figuring them out—not
just reporting, “What I found in the library.” The paper
is the “story” of this adventure. Here’s a refresher:
Visual
Analysis – Explain the unique visual identity
of your work of art, and how this identity is built up. Show how
the artist combines color, line texture, etc. to create a distinctive
pattern, a total visual effect, or send a “message”
of sorts.
In
this part especially, it’s your ideas. You
can use first person—“I think.”
Background
and History – Reconstruct the cultural context within
which your work of art was produced. Help us see the work of art
through the eyes of the artist and those around them who viewed
or “used” the work.
Note: Be very careful here. Don’t just pile
up “facts.” Show specifically
how each bit of history helps us understand the work of art itself.
The
“story” format is flexible. You can blend the visual
and historical however makes most sense—for your reader. You
will want two other pieces:
Introduction
– Briefly lay out the plan you’ll go
by in your paper—a “map” (or “story outline”)—so
the reader can follow along, think with you as
you write.
Tell
us what “missing pieces” you’re hunting down?
Or give us a taste of your conclusions, where you ended up—then
the paper is the “how I got there.”
Conclusion
– Explain what you’ve “concluded”
from your study. What did you come up with, decide, figure out?
Wrap things up in a few words.
Finally,
harden yourself. Don’t’ fall back into “old”
term paper habits. A traditional paper
sticks pretty much to the facts—gathering lots of Who, What,
Where, When (the raw material). It re-assembles other people’s
ideas, cutting and pasting them into a smooth word puzzle. This
process takes serious effort.
An
exceptional paper goes farther. It asks questions.
It looks beyond the What to Why. It takes the sources you find,
and explains the work of art in terms of those
sources, tying it all together with your ideas.
“Analysis” shows your mind in action—the detective
work—, how you reasoned things out, and the results.
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